Monday, October 24, 2011

long poem

Poem by Lucie Thesee
Handsome, like those foam-topped tidal waves breaking high, in little crystal globes.
Handsome, like the breeze that lifts a little tuft of tulle. If tulle were life.
Handsome, like a frozen face, tear-tracked, when the sun hammers down.
Handsome. Like fire.
Handsome, like the bottomless sky, with that one proud penetrating star.

But handsome, too, like a sky that’s an arching ocean, and an earth prone as an ocean’s floor.
Handsome ocean-sky, and earth-sea floor.
The big question is: where’s the man in a scene like this?

Handsome: the man asleep. And the night sky swarms, tropic and wide.
Handsome, in some ornamental, muggy midnight caught between cat’s paws. Sharp-nailed:
they prick.
Handsome: the firefly swarms around you.
Handsome, like a soap bubble grazing a little black dress. Like a soap-bubble pricked with a pin.
Handsomeness a rainbow, a rainbow an arrow, an arrow in my chest.
Handsome, like shadows slow-rolling on a Japanese screen.
Handsome motion.
Handsome as life and poison.
Sun-blood handsome. Bleeding sun.

Friday, October 21, 2011

currently

WEEKLY READING LOG
this week: 133
last week: 125
last last week: 132
semester: 1386

Sentences I enjoyed from other peoples style mapping blogs...
From Hoosier XC 3366
1.  "The Mud Below" has a poetic, imagistic connotation, a common, familiar elevation with a country twang, and a sweet, musical sound that creates an overall sense  of contentment.
From The New Zealander
2. The language is rough and coarse in order to portray the common colloquialisms of southern Texas.
From T-REX
3.The musical sounds generated by these love poems convey a harmonious and melodious tone to the book that adds to the fragile yet helpless attitude of the teenagers in love.
From For Lack Of a Better Name
4.He writes as he speaks and thinks, producing a style more compatible with leisure readers and lower intellects, rather than very well educated readers who are looking for a challenging read.
From Hog Smog Blog
5. His grating talk on life and drugs captures you into the book as its prey even though the content of his words [are] suggestive.

I liked these blogs because they all used neat adjectives that caught my attention. They set themselves apart from the normal adjectives such as "exciting" and "dull" or "harsh". I liked how Hoosier XC 3366 decided to comment on the authors diction and described it as a "twang", I enjoyed The New Zealander's choice of the word "colloquialisms", T-REX used a unique approach on describing the teenager's love, For Lack of a Better Name decided to give an array of adjectives that made his sentence interesting, and Hog Smog Blog used a good simile, "captures you into the book like it's prey".
good job ya'll. you did great.

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Woman, you stank

Your smell is like acid burning in my nose, it makes me cringe to my toes. It's like I can almost see it swirling to get me, going up my nostrils, and then to kill me. Take a step back would you please? I am now falling to my knees. Is it a perfume of a meat or have you not showered in a week? Whatever it is I can't complete because your stinch is the ultimate defeat.

I got bored at work...

The Virgin Suicides

I started this book last week and I really like it. It's by Jeffrey Eugdnfijganobr (however you spell it). Its about these sisters who all kill themselves, and the boys in the town are all obsessed and intrigued by this. The book is narrated by one of the boys who grew up with the girls, well the girls didn't actually grow up. If that makes since? The girls are pretty much portrayed as angels or perfect to the boys, so the boys are all pretty confused, as am I at the moment, as to why they would kill themselves. Just like any other book I find interesting there is a movie, so yes there is a movie that coincides with the book. It has Kirstin Dunst in it I think. Well that is pretty much it for that book, I'm still working on it so ta ta for now. Kim Possible out. call me, page me, if you wanna reach me.

Style Mapping

The excerpts from Stardust by Neil Gaiman, Blood Meridian by Cormac McCarthy, and The Virgin Suicides by Jeffrey Eugenides all display different styles of diction. In Neil's excerpt he writes in a style that is dull and archaic as he describes that stoney features of the town of Wall. McCarthy's excerpt displays a coarse, dreary style that is accented with a grinding rhythm.  Different from the others, Eugenides conducts a style that is scholarly yet gloomy while the reader stumbles on the cacophonous language.

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

POEM TIME WITH LAUREN

I picked up a book
the cover has a great look
Its call "The Virgin Suicides"
no wonder it caught my eye!

We have a substitute
he read some poem about a boot
the class listened in awe
of the words that were so raw.

Blogging is a blast
I'm going to save it for last
poems are super fun
but right now I've gotta run.

Saturday, October 8, 2011

currently

I totz forgot to do a currently from last week, probably because we usually all do them as a class but we were all working on our essays. Oh well, so here is my stuff.

WEEKLY READING LOG
this week: 132 pages
last week: 202 pages
semester: 1132 pages
GET AT THIS. thats a lot of pages...

anywhoo...fav sentences??

1. The purpose to life is to live it, to taste experience to the utmost, to reach out eagerly and without fear for newer and richer experience. -Eleanor Roosevelt
2. “Mom says it's because she has PMS."
"Do you even know what that means?"
"I'm not a little kid anymore. It means pissed-at- men syndrome”
-Nicholas Sparks The Last Song